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书面表达题的考查要点及评分原则
准确运用语法、词汇、拼写、标点。使用某些句型、短语、清楚地表达自己的意思，写出流畅易懂的短文。
从四个角度, 分5-6个档次给分, 评分主要从以下几个方面考虑：
1) 内容要点 (content points) 。
2) 运用词汇和语法结构的数量。
3) 词汇的准确运用与句子的结构把握 (accuracy of vocabulary and structures) 。
4) 上下文的连贯性(coherence)。
各个档次的给分范围及标准(满分25分)
第五档(很好)：(21-25分)
1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6.达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差)：(1-5分)
1.未完成试题规定的任务。
2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6.信息未能传达给读者。
F.不得分：(0分)
范文
（一）
Dear Sir，
My name is Li Hua. I am writing to show my concern about the effects of modern media on us students.
Nowadays，iPads are very popular in our school. Many students hold the view that possessing an iPad is a fashion. There is no doubt that with it we can listen to music，download learning materials，and so on. In other words，it's helpful to our studies，especially our English learning.
However，each coin has two sides. Some students bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music，which ruins our learning atmosphere. What's worse，some even waste their precious time playing games.
In my opinion，school is a place where we should focus our attention on lessons，so iPads should be banned in classroom. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
（二）
Hi guys,
Good news for you! A Karaoke party will be held in our School Lecture Hall on May 4, 2015. The party organized by Student Union of Xinhua Middle School will start at 7:00 pm and last for about two hours. Teachers and students who like English songs are all welcome to attend the party.
I’m willing to invite you to the party and expecting to sing an English song together with you. I hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient to you. Let’s enjoy ourselves. Please call 89346752 for further information.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
（三）
Senior middle school graduates students of our school have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities.
About 35% of the students believe the choice should be based on their own interests. They say interest is the mother of success. It is a miserable thing to have to spend most of your time studying what you have no interest in.
Most of the students, however, insist that main consideration should be given to the needs of our society. They argue that not everyone can find the job they like best. Besides, interest is not something unchangeable. We can always develop it.
Interestingly, about 20% of the students find it difficult to make a choice and would rather depend on their parents or teachers to make a decision for them.
（四）
Dear friends,
In recent years, with the popularity of the Internet, many of us devote a great deal of time to it. As a consequence, we don’t write as well as we did in the past. In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting, we’d like to offer some suggestions:
To begin with, we are supposed to spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books. We’d better form the habit of keeping diaries every day to practice handwriting. Besides, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails. Beautiful handwriting is beneficial to us students. So please pay more attention to our handwriting.
Students’ Union
（五）
Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings
and opinions and even get help with their foreign language studies.
Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
I hold the view that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can find it in our classmates and other people around us.
（六）
Guangming High School is in the west of the city. When you enter the school gate, you can find the teaching building on your left and the gymnasium on your right. Walking on further, you can see a round building which is the library in the middle of the campus. The building on the northwest corner serves as the dining hall and the building opposite it on the northeast corner is the students ‘dormitory.
The high school has a history of nearly 100 years. There are about 5000 students studying here and a teaching staff of about 300. The campus covers an area of 24000 square meters with bushes and flowers surrounding every building, which provides a quiet and beautiful environment for the students.
（七）
I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my parents over whether I can watch TV after school.
My parents hold the opinion that I should study hard so that I will have more choices in the future. Besides, they consider that it is harmful to my eyes to watch TV too often. But in my view, it is TV that gives me something that I am interested in. In addition, it may relax my mind when I am tired, in which case the efficiency of my study will be improved.
In the end we reached an agreement. Only at weekends am I allowed to watch TV, however, the programs are limited to news, sports and entertainment, not including TV plays. This agreement is acceptable to me for it is beneficial to my study and life.
（八）
Ladies and gentlemen, I feel it a great honor to have a chance to give a speech here, talking about fog and haze weather. Since the end of last year, fog and haze weather has occurred a lot in some areas of China, which has done great harm to our daily life. Many traffic accidents happened because of the bad weather. Besides, more and more citizens have to go to see the doctor because of the serious disease caused by the fog and haze.
We should take measures to reduce fog and haze weather. The government should suggest people go to work or school with the public transportation. Also more trees should be planted. As for me，I will go to school by bike or on foot.
Would you join us in protecting the environment?
Thank you.
（九）
Attention, please everyone! Welcome to this resort!
You are lucky enough to arrive here at the very season to visit the famous place of interest, for a great many flowers are in full bloom.
Before we climb up the mountain, I have something important to tell you. Firstly, you’re expected to stay with the group all the time and not fall far behind the others; otherwise, it will cause a lot of trouble. Secondly, while climbing up the mountain, mind your steps to avoid possible accidents along the narrow paths. Last but the most important, smoking is strictly forbidden in the area in case of forest fires.
I hope you’ll have a pleasant trip. Enjoy your time！
（十）
Dear Sir,
My name is Liu Yang, from Hope High School in Jinan. I’m glad to get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland, so I would like to apply for it.
I am eighteen, studying in Senior 3. I am sociable, easy-going and good at communicating with others. Besides, I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment. As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and managed to get high grades. All these will enable me to continue my study in your university. What’s more, my hobbies are playing basketball and football and I am also good at playing the violin.
Looking forward to your reply .
Yours sincerely,
Liu Yang
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发表于 2018-2-19 17:11:47