高考英语写作指导(04)

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　　One day Tom was lying in bed when he heard his alarm clock ring. He jumped out of bed and hurried to school without breakfast. He got to school and ran into his classroom, but was surprised to find no one in it.
        　　解题指导：通过审题，我们知道，本题要求考生将本文扩写成120词左右的短文，而且必须合乎情理。对于这类试题，我们可以在合乎逻辑的前提下，增加一些对环境、人物心理活动或行为的描写等，以丰富文章的情节和内容。
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        　　One day, Tom was lying in bed when suddenly he heard his alarm clock ring. He opened his eyes and looked at his clock. “Ah, it’s seven now. I’m late for school now.” With these words, he jumped out of bed. He got dressed and finished washing and brushing in just ten minutes. Then he ran out of his home without breakfast. He didn’t dare to stop on his way to school and ran all the way. When he got to school, he was already out of breath. He ran into his classroom and was surprised to find that there was no one in the classroom. Only at that time did he realize that it was Sunday that day! (from www.nmet168.com)
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