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发表于 2016-7-24 11:28:06
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链接模板一:
As can be seen from the picture(s),there is a widespread concern over the issue that作文题目。But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that观点一。In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows;in the first place,原因一。Furthermore/In the second place,原因二。So it goes without saying that 观点一.People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that观点二。In their point of view,on the one hand,原因一。On the other hand ,原因二.Therefore ,there is no doubt that观点二。
As far as I am concerned,I firmly support the view that观点一或者二.It is not only because________,but also because_________.
链接模板二:
描述事件发生的时间、地点:This story happend in(地点)on/in(时间);one day,once upon a time ,the other day,it was in(地点)that the story happened,it was on/in(时间)that.....
举例说明:For example(instance)...such as A,B,Cand so on ;A good case in point is...A particular example for this is...
说明故事主体:This story is not rare...such dilemma we often meet in daily life...The story still has a realistic significance.
提出假设的方式:Suppose that ...Just imagine what would be like if...It is reasonable to expect...It is not surprising that...
描述人的情感:be/feel delighted(happy,sad,upset,nervous,disappointed,surprised,frustrated,satisfied....);to one's delight(joy,surprise,sadness,sorrow,disappointment....);make sb angry(sad upset,happy...);what made sb(most/more)surprised/upset/sad/angry is that...
积累一些过渡性词语:
表示递进:and then ,more importantly,furthermore,moreover,above all,...
表空间顺序:behind,near,beside,far from,in front of,to the left,to the right,beyond,above,below...
表时间顺序:after,before,earlier,later,immediately,soon,next,now,then,first,second,finally...
表示强调:indeed,in fact,surely,without any doubt...
表目的:for the purpose,so that,in order to,in order that,with the purpose of...
表转折:but ,however,yet,on the contrary,in spite of.nevertheless...
2.开放性作文:
以开放式考查书面表达是北京卷一个特色,可以说北京是原创,但是有一定的不足,我觉得既然是开放式,那么只要学生说得言之有理就能得到不错的分数,可是现实中不是这样的。这样开放式的作文居然有思维的局限,因为一个图往往只有一个意思,如果学生们看不出这个意思,就被看做偏离了意思,分数肯定上不去,既然是开放式,我觉得只要学生言之有理,并且表达的合理,就能得不错的分数。这个题目北京学生均分都很低,一般都是5分左右。那么既然是考试,就按照考试的规矩来,我建议大家从以下几个方面来备考: |
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